TerraNation's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[(OTG) Cirque Du Dismay - Intro]

Hey its pretty good work with orchestra sounds.
I would rather start song intro from 00.25 and up thats what i like the song but before that i couldent really understand that parts at all.
It was so confusing like samples where scramble together.
Dident really had any impact of the rest of the song.

Other then that pretty good song

gl with the contest.

[Temporal]

Sup?

Very well made deep house stylish.
Vocal soild i see spend amount of time in fl studio as i do and reason why fl crash is mostly beause of 196 plugins :P require alot memeory i usely cut down to half those plugins by make some heavy parts in to dry wave files. Most anoying is a have fl shuffles like roboot.

Song sounds very prof done. My own idea would rather had louder piano at end filter down the track make cut down filter. Complete stop from progression + melody reminds me of pop song on radio shows. Perhaps a club version of this track for the release ? :)

Gl with the contest /cheers

[Moon City]

Well done.
underdogs or not i mean the song is pretty good.
It does sounds you know what you doing both mixing and mastering.
Well balanced track prolly one the best i listen to so far in the contest.
I should be ready to upload mine soon. gl with the contest.

Michael-Flaherty responds:

Thanks so much! Good luck to you as well!

[-Wavy Fox-]

Hey pretty soild work on ur track.
Progression work is nice.
Melody wise its pretty good even tho some parts of melody feels offkey like at 1min mark u can hear dosent really match with song at all. Same at 1.22 sounds very offkey not sure if that was intentional ? but still sounds offkey in my ears.
Other than some technical issues with melody its a pretty soild track.

gl in the contest /tn

Preds responds:

Thank you for the great review! I'll try to get better with my melodies!

[Free Stardust]

Igive feedback to all tracks for Final at contest i kinda expect pretty good competition.
I have listen to few other of ur tracks and can say you could have done this alot better. Sounds harsh but this track sounds you rushed it.
It has like no structure.
Intro its ok but it feels like its not complete consider at 4s into the song small cap when u change score and chord progression sounds abit off tune.
Progression work is pretty nice.
Break at 1.29 is ok, melody no so great.
Outro also not sure it just flat end 3.29 its like song is missing something.

good work tho but sorry for low score.
But i really like track the voyage that would been pretty nice song as final entry.

anyway gl with contest / TN

Equinaga responds:

cant win em all i guess

[NGUAC2021 Finals]

Song is pretty good, it has nice melody´s very creative work.
Intro would like the traditional house build up rather then that default vst sound.
Kick and progression is pretty soild. House music is very repetitive like trance but thats kinda part genre but when i listen to ur track i hear 4 different style of the melody and thats make song generic. Its like u had an idea but ur tryed to make song more complicated then it is.
Normal tips from me would say you should always follow a red line an structure of ur track, Intro > break > build up> main lead > break > build up > Main lead epic > outro if you understand what i mean. Anyway gl with contest /cheers

Fumijena responds:

thank you for your feedback! <3

[Battle over Planet Y]

Powerful cinematic soundtracks i wish u had another off melody with an epic strings or any other instrument around 1min mark or something to keep song alive and intressting with more elements in it.
Main break at 1.40 it was complete silence i think you should had keep string sound filter longer.
Other then that its pretty good track. Thanks for shareing and gl with the contest.

[Divine Ultimacy]

Well done.
Melody is pretty well done. Progression work is very nice to. Gl with the contest

IndexatioN responds:

Thanks :)

[(NGUAC FINAL) RealGares x Loftt - I Don't Know]

not sure why people zero bomb it track is very solid and nice quality both in mixing and mastering.
Very nice track prof vocalist, gl with contest

RealGares responds:

It's because I made a comment on an NG song on the Featured Content page saying that the mixing and mastering needed a lot of work xD. Anyways I appreciate your kind comment :)

[Clubringer - Sound Of My Dream (AshuraTH Remix)]

I wanna be honest with you song can be mutch better with some mixing.
like turn down some volume on the bass and kick make sure it dosen't go over -6db.
Try sync it with you main kick try discover some sidechain effect with ur bass and pads,
There is alot of tutorials on youtube w/e Music Daw you use.

Atm melody needs some push atm they dissapear in the bass and kick kinda eating up most of the song.
Piano melody is loud without any EQ reveerbs it makes it very dry and boring.
You are learning producer and i recommand watch some tutorials to learn some new techniques. Sorry low rate score but i hope you listen to my advice i have self been there i have self work hard to figure out what im doing wrong.

Time you figure all out, you will see alot improvements.

Cheers dude

/TN

AshuraTheHedgehog242 responds:

Whoa dude! Thanks 4 your honest review! Y' know I was already a fan of your trance music since 2017 before I hopped on this social site. I never thought u would review my work and BTW that is my style of music and IDK if I could improve but if I could, then I would. Thanks again!

-AshuraTH