I wanna be honest with you song can be mutch better with some mixing.
like turn down some volume on the bass and kick make sure it dosen't go over -6db.
Try sync it with you main kick try discover some sidechain effect with ur bass and pads,
There is alot of tutorials on youtube w/e Music Daw you use.
Atm melody needs some push atm they dissapear in the bass and kick kinda eating up most of the song.
Piano melody is loud without any EQ reveerbs it makes it very dry and boring.
You are learning producer and i recommand watch some tutorials to learn some new techniques. Sorry low rate score but i hope you listen to my advice i have self been there i have self work hard to figure out what im doing wrong.
Time you figure all out, you will see alot improvements.