Realy nice!
Nice bass work, Vengeance Essential Samples really classic especily the loops best tips when u use the loops is try rechange them make more unique.
Nexus is an Very common vsti nowdays, i use it to but mostly for layering itry creat my own sounds with v-station its very powerful vsti, You should try it.
Z3tra is good but sometimes its has abit problem with the freq, screwing up mixing abit. But So far its very well done, And Shame song has suffering 0 bombing beacuse its has talented work behind. Even ifeelt the song could have end around 5min atlest.
At 06.29 to 06.55 is huge silence :) ithink was some rendering issue or u had forget clip the any automation.
Igive u 5 beaucse its very creativ classic trance work, Thought melody wasent catchy or that much energy it could been, Could need some more elements in the song like add synth keep song more intressting. Longer break "i love longer break beacuse buildups is very important to me" Try explore some more VST try work with own Presents, NExus sadly today overused. Other then that just keep up with the hard work, and if you got time check out my tracks also made with Fl studio 9 maybe can give some insperations Cya /TN