Igive feedback to all tracks for Final at contest i kinda expect pretty good competition.
I have listen to few other of ur tracks and can say you could have done this alot better. Sounds harsh but this track sounds you rushed it.
It has like no structure.
Intro its ok but it feels like its not complete consider at 4s into the song small cap when u change score and chord progression sounds abit off tune.
Progression work is pretty nice.
Break at 1.29 is ok, melody no so great.
Outro also not sure it just flat end 3.29 its like song is missing something.
good work tho but sorry for low score.
But i really like track the voyage that would been pretty nice song as final entry.
anyway gl with contest / TN