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[Melody Blender]

Thanks for the review!

Im not much in to an drum n base songs but its stil electronic and thats we doing!
what program do you use?
I like the bass its strong in this song only i could recomand is the samples is abit oldish somehow.
try "download Vengeance Essential House 3 Electro" it has alot powerful electronica sounds from dance to drum n base styled sounds"http://www.youtube.com/watch?v =ksbpLq2UwOA"

Synths are alright you have talent to make nice melodys but i prefer try explore make more powerful synth sounds. Since idont know what softwere you use but if FL studio try get some vstis.

Have a nice day /TN

square-spirit responds:

five months later and yes you are right, i need better sounds. i use FL studio.

[Cry No More (WIP)]

Intressting

Its really clam peacefuly track, Decent mix even i wish hear more of the melodic part not just intro melody its kinda dont give me the picture of the song, Bells are just nice touch but ibelieve way to soft for me.

but keep on working /TN

Absolix responds:

Thank you man! Review means a lot, I rarely get them! The newer version definitely has more melody solo'd out, with more building elements that help gain emotional value. So hopefuly that might make it sound better!

Again thanks a lot for the review!

[Premoeffect - Green Plums]

Not bad not bad!

Its very nice song but sadly i would like some more from it, like extra backround synth for exampel some extra lead keep the song even more uplifting.
Even stronger mainbreak. But other then that is really nice track. Check out mine when you have time /TN

PrEmoEffect responds:

Yeah, i'm working on some sound design projects right now that I think would be suitable for your liking. All sorts of modulations make this CoolHau5 project well... cool. Haha, thanks for the review.

[How Wind Falls]

Nice melody

Really nice melody at begining, Im sure itcould been even nicer with more experiance behind the work of music creation. I hear its still alot todo in this song and how it could been much better trust me it could. Well its not much i could say more then give you tops try explore even more. If i had melody like this it could been really amezing uplifting symphonic trance sound. Anyway keep work hard /TN

Semaphore responds:

I try many different ways to master or insert and change the sound of instruments

I'm never really fine with the sound but after 1 week I have to do a cut in that hell =D

it's still a hobby and not a professionel thing

that's why I'm sharing this with you ;)

thank you very much TerraNation

greetings Sema

[Surreal-Schizm]

Not Yours!

Its Present song in Fl studio from 4one so please take it away noob

GOAT-MEN responds:

hey idiot, i never claimed this song was mine, i uploaded it for flash users, so bite me

[-Something Wonderful-]

Had check other track before judge.

Intro very decent. From the other song i listned to. Isuggest maybe take off the old track or put it somewhere else.

What i listen here you learned from ur misstake back then and got hang of the balance of the songs. Intro is very standard but is fine Piano on intro is fine but very bright.
Idident really like the chord piano could need more epiced version of it.

Really nice mainbreak very classic tunes. Guitar is ok but barely hear it in this big sounding of strings. Synth work intro was fine but then on main part really got lacked of energy very cheesy to me could be mixed better. Ithink Synth to be honestly is way to hard from the rest of the song it could be something else. Arp synths there alot of style to it. I reconize basic every sounds Nexus vst?

Anyway its alot better then ur song from 09 just still it need some refine someplaces Especily on the synths. Im sorry if english is abit rusty typeing. But keep on working /TN

SpiritWolf14 responds:

Thanks for the serious reveiw! The part I struggle with most in my tracks are the mixdowns and mastering, I still need some work there. And yes most of the sounds in the breakdown are from nexus but almost everything else is v-station or sytrus. Once again, thanks for the in depth reveiw!

[<TeK> Dreams of the Unive]

Really nice!

Really nice build up but im must atlest be honestly about the track.
I like the cypertrance style synth work. But the progression work is kinda bad why?
Clap is loud and anoying. Hats its ok but its dosent give any energy should try add some more give that extra rythmen.

Add synth is fine but even you done the song in Logic pro its missing alot of mixing. Some of the sound is higher then other.. I would suggest remaster the track or learn how to mix the song better. There is alot of guide for lodgic pro to learn about the Frequnese work Equlizer and much much more.

This atlest review not comment / TN

TeKNeTiC responds:

Thanks for the detailed review! Yeah, I haven't mastered it at all (as it says above) so the sound quality is sort of crappy. And now listening to it again, I agree completely that the clap is terrible.. I'll work on it some more and reupload.

The mixing is a lot better on my new song, give it a listen.

[TI:.Spooky Status]

Woa!

Yes indeed mix is really wierd, Its not eq problem at the intro for sure its volyme the sample is so high volyme its really distored its hurting the ears, for that you can get very low score for this track.

Same with kick something dosent seem right either it pumping so headset is going freaky. Bass is also to high volyme noone of the song is blending well with eachother atm.

Ican say try remake it, try look over your mixing Remeber dont force ur sound pass over -0 dp try be under -6dp thats the basic mixing.
Sorry but ihave to say it was horrible song cant be listned to with this disturbed distored sounds. Keep up let me know when you have complete it /TN

TIMarbury responds:

thx alot. the voulme is over dramatic for sure... i'm currently fixing this song. :X

[Easy 2 Trance]

Review!

Generic trance you say? ok yes abit like the effect work its really something unique.

Not really like the filter intro of the melody plus ithink its abit to much volyme from the rest of the song kicks are very weak. Some more mixing and more creativ melody at in the end its getting very repativ but im sure its gona really nice with more work on it /TN

RandomAnnoyance responds:

Ah thanks,
A little hard to read the review, but i got the jest of it.
Yeah, as the fade at the end shows, its still being worked on. I need a second part, but I'm no good with second parts of songs... due to writers block :(

Thanks tho! I'll take the tips into consideration when I work on it more!
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