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I kinda like the melody but for my own tast its way to much experimental. And it hard to call it trance beacuse when think trance is layers and melody powerful buildups...
Reason i woulden't call it trance is:
First you hear chill out very calm track lovely piano work really well done there.

Then Second: It turns out to be some more Electronic Slow down tempo dance!
then Third: From no where dub step!? For me its simply dosent match the song at all.
I like dub step i like all kind of music.
But to me this song has to much experimental styles in 1 track im getting confused as artist/listner what are you trying to achive todo this?!

Trust me in this i did alot experimental in past days was fine but eventually people began to tire of this and it was not accepted anymore. newgrounds has to many false comments i prefer be honestly atlest.

Its good track but ithink you should stick with dub step for it self and trance for it self.
Quality of dubstep was really nice was not bad at all. /TN

VGSongbird responds:

I appreciate your honest input. You should know this is the most experimental I've ever been with a piece. I think if you like Trance, you should check out some of my other stuff. I'd hate this piece to be the one you judge me on. :(

Its has very nice melody, never consider to remake it? Ithink it has more potentional.
Iwould try change the bass abit to more arped maybe more uplifting style atm it feels abit to simpel.

How many songs are in this one?

Anyway creation for your meleody isent bad anything can be repetitive in a song but to provent that happend you need build variations.
Exampel : 8 second rule. Every 8s should be something new to keep track intressting dosent have to be something big just something added.

Then everything will come to you in time but depends how much you self wanna learn it.
Music can be either talented people or like me and you a hard working person with a willing to learn how to make music.

merry christmas and keep on work hard /TN

SoulofT responds:

Sorry I didn't understand your first question, but I think the answer would be one song?

I like that 8 second rule, will definitely keep it in mind when producing in the future =)

Yes I will keep working hard until I can produce quality music.

Thanks a lot for the review, and merry Christmas to you too!

Thanks for the review!

Im not much in to an drum n base songs but its stil electronic and thats we doing!
what program do you use?
I like the bass its strong in this song only i could recomand is the samples is abit oldish somehow.
try "download Vengeance Essential House 3 Electro" it has alot powerful electronica sounds from dance to drum n base styled sounds"http://www.youtube.com/watch?v =ksbpLq2UwOA"

Synths are alright you have talent to make nice melodys but i prefer try explore make more powerful synth sounds. Since idont know what softwere you use but if FL studio try get some vstis.

Have a nice day /TN

square-spirit responds:

five months later and yes you are right, i need better sounds. i use FL studio.

Not so bad at all.

Icould see this song in some games its really has alot of energy and life.
So far prolly best song i listen so far atm at the chart rest idont know they are not trance not even close..

yo,, very nice melody here. Never thought about make some club house tracks to? :)

its like mainbreak

This would be perfect mainbreak in to trance sure alittle more sound then just piano and violin like more strong power comes up.
Its beautiful melody

i have heard better

No offens but this song is like kids music only 8 bit sound make head blow up ithought people stoped make this kinda crap., Anyway quality its like over compressed and this synth is very anoying.
Iknow you F 777 do make better song then this...

Indeed nice collections

I like the second chord work sounds very familar but its nice, Finish them i believe you able make ur self some nice releases. /TN

comment!

Melody is very soft but careful with the volymes on the bass and kick they are now fighting each other makes rest of the song very unclear.
I suggest change the volyme bass abit try push up the kick abit more.
Chord work is fine but with the bass it makes almost hard to hear.
Main hook comes in also abit loud.

Mainly suggestion is try EQ some more and adjust volyme alittle.
Like previews post said made bass into offbeats makes songs much better.

Keep on working /TN

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